There are some things I like and some I do not about this bike.
I like the general vintage styling and line and that it's a modern mono-shock design.
I like the modern dual disc front and rear disc brakes.
I don't like that the rims and handlebar are painted black. So over done...
I don't like that there is no passenger seat.
I don't like the half fenders. The bike would look a lot better with full fenders IMO.
And yeah the rider's seat would look better and be in a better riding position being raised up a bit higher with a couple nice springs in the rear.
To me, if you're going to design a vintage style bike, then make it vintage looking. This one looks kinda half assed to me and looks more like someone's bobber project.